Thursday, September 14, 2017

River

   River 

Cold and Bitter
Soft and Flowing
Slow and Fast 
Quite and Loud 


Mountain 

Big and Tall 
Never moving 
Always There 
Growing Bigger 


Ocean 

Strong and Large
Calm and Pretty
Vast and Wide 
Fun and Water 



Sky 

Huge and Soft 
Clouds are Big 
Big and Blue 
Never Moving, Always Changing


8 comments:

Anonymous said...

I love this. It's such a creative poem!

Anonymous said...

I loved your choice of words the way you grabbed me by the arm and would not let go 😊.

Anonymous said...

I really enjoyed your poetry. I'm just wondering what got you into poetry?

Anonymous said...

This is a very creative style for the poem. I love it how you locked my eyes onto the poem and I enjoyed every second of it! What inspired you to start poetry?

Anonymous said...

This is some amazing writing, I wish I could write like that! I really liked how you centered the words so it was easier to read.

Anonymous said...

I love this poem and I love how it's not just one subject it's many. What do you like about poetry?

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Anonymous said...

I love the way you are very descriptive about each and everyone ! I think that you were spot on about each and everything you did. One of the things I always think about the river is that it is powerful but peaceful ! If you were to describe the sky what would you put !

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