Cold and peaceful
I say my goodbyes
As the water passes by
I look at the ripples and picture an image of life
Life is like a river
Delicate and gracious
But there are rocks and ripples in our way
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I like this, because it is really calming and it has a really nice message.
I agree with Mr. Cruz, I also enjoy how calming it is. I really like the picture part. Keep up the great work!
When I read this it made me think of buttered toast because it is simple strong and sweet...🤗
When I read this it made me think of buttered toast because it is simple strong and sweet...🤗
This was a very delicate style of writing and I admire this piece of work! Keep writing and keep sending good messages out there! 🙂🙌🏻
I also agree with Mr. Cruz it is a lovely message and very calming I'd like to hear more things like this
This is amazing and everything you say is relevant and true.
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