Won’t Stand
___ gets you so mad,
You pick them apart like grass.
Every little thing they do,
Makes you mad.
Hypocrite,
Tells you not to do something,
But then does it.
You wonder,
Why does ______ get you
So Mad?
am I really the loser you say I am Am I really the one that needs to suffer How many times do I need to be sent away before you know it’s...
8 comments:
I liked the way you put in — so they could add in whatever they wanted.
This is a wonderfully written poem! I love how you made blanks so people could fill in a person of choice. The line breaks added real meaning, well done!
I like your story
Good job
Great poem! Is blank a real person that’s getting you mad?
It’s pretty cool the way you put dashes for the reader to add in whatever name they wanted
I agree with the people who said that they liked when you put the—in, it makes it more personal for the reader
So much emotion in this poem! I think that many people could relate to it !
Really like the choices of words that you have in your poem.
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