Wednesday, March 7, 2018

Anger

Can’t Stand
Won’t Stand

___ gets you so mad,
You pick them apart like grass.

Every little thing they do, 
Makes you mad.

Hypocrite,
Tells you not to do something, 
But then does it.

You wonder, 
Why does ______ get you
So Mad?


8 comments:

Anonymous said...

I liked the way you put in — so they could add in whatever they wanted.

Anonymous said...

This is a wonderfully written poem! I love how you made blanks so people could fill in a person of choice. The line breaks added real meaning, well done!

Anonymous said...

I like your story
Good job

Anonymous said...

Great poem! Is blank a real person that’s getting you mad?

Anonymous said...

It’s pretty cool the way you put dashes for the reader to add in whatever name they wanted

Anonymous said...

I agree with the people who said that they liked when you put the—in, it makes it more personal for the reader

Anonymous said...

So much emotion in this poem! I think that many people could relate to it !

Anonymous said...

Really like the choices of words that you have in your poem.

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