Friday, February 9, 2018

Storm

Tell me to let it out, 
tell me that if i don't, 
my grief becomes a scream 
trapped inside my own depths

tell me it will become a constant cry 
in the dark 
or a sob never released,

so please,
tell me to scream, shout, cry, do it all, 
tell me to do everything i have ever needed to do

tell me to do it the way the sky does it, 

tell me to let all my thunder,
lightning,
and rain go,
tell me that i am getting cleansed, 

tell me that my storm is the only way to release all of my pain.

4 comments:

Anonymous said...

This is really in depth! Nice job on emotional descriptions!

Anonymous said...

I love how you compare a piece of nature, to a serious feeling. Well done on how this poetry has a point but also flows and makes sense.

Anonymous said...

This is such a great job! Keep up this amazing work. I really enjoyed it.

Anonymous said...

I love your quote! By the way, I wrote my own poem that’s kind of similar to this poem after reading this

Why

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